I appreciate rhe advice and see what you are trying to say. By the way what did you like and dislike about the products. One last thing, are you signed up with clickbank?First off, I like giving people the option to watch the item. That's a much better way to do it. :)
Now for your ad. Other than a few punctuation errors and run-on sentences(I'm a writer so I notice these things), overall the ad isn't bad.
I do think you are trying to market way too many things in one auction. Try limiting it to one or two per auction, and maybe add 'Click Here' for more info, because if someone doesn't bother to mouse over some of it, they won't notice that there are links.
Also the giant 'Watch this item' banners are kind of distracting and annoying from a reader's point of view.
I'm saying this as a potential customer, and giving you an honest critique. Overall, it's a good idea, just needs a bit of work. :)
When it was suggested that you begin your own thread about the issue I personally was under the impression that you were going to teach us the benifits of clickbank and how you set it up, how you are advertising and how we can too, not how to join the programs that you pick. After reading all this, I feel like I've just been to a car dealership.
One other thing I noticed... people are going to be skeptical of 'titanium powerseller secrets' and how well your products work, since you aren't a powerseller yourself. I know for me, I see something like that and I immediately think 'If this stuff is so good, why aren't they powersellers themselves... must be trying to sell me another program that doesn't work'.
I'm not saying the products don't work, just that people can be very skeptical when the person selling stuff like this hasn't made it work for them yet. Think about it... would you take advice on how to become a millionaire from the corner bum who hasn't had money in 10 years? Or are you going to take the advice of someone who is a millionaire or very close to becoming one?
None of this is meant to be mean... just my opinion, and hopefully will help others who aren't sure why stuff like this might not be working for them.
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