If you could use some commas, full stops, capital letters and other appropriate punctuation, it might be a bit easier to understand the above post. I'm thinking most readers would abandon trying to make sense of it after about five lines. It's extremely difficult to understand. Sorry to be pedantic, but if you can't construct a proper sentence, then you might need to find somebody who can help you with your copy if you expect people to think of you as a professional business.
Jg i took it as you was excited about the website and i would be to.It was obvious you was just in a hurry.
Punctuation most certainly is a necessity, either here or anywhere else that you are hoping to get a message across. My point is that if you are spending $5000 to get your website going and your copy is totally unprofessional, then your money will be wasted. Most people online have a pretty short attention span. If people have difficulty understanding your point, they will click out and find another place to spend their money. I really do think it's worth the time and expense of getting professional copy writers if you do have a problem with syntax and punctuation. Everybody will excuse the odd typo or misspelling but sentences need to actually make sense.
Honestly I think this is a waste of time. Fair enough trying to do something different, good on you. But as a business its pretty hard to see where the return would be.
Why would anyone else use it as apposed to alibaba, b2b or global sources. It just won't happen. There are too many of them and they all do it better. The only way you could make it worse is to have it 110
% scam free which is pretty difficult.
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